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whoabacha

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The writing in the sex scenes is very similar to what you'd find in grandmas spicy romance novels. Very off-putting and not at all sexy. Trying to be too descriptive, imo. It's redundant when it's a visual novel. The art is nice, though, and the writing in other parts is fine, apart from some the sentence structure can be a bit weird.
 
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robin312

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I like the idea, but implementation is poor from point of view:

- Yen is just ugly
- Optimization is very bad for simple VN, it's like a miner inside it
 
5.00 star(s) 4 Votes